Brochureworld.ca

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• April 14, 2011 6:25 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #52, Can we lose the world all together and then make the icons 10-20% bigger with a blue circle and a blue icon.
  
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• April 14, 2011 4:31 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #44 - Also its 2 words. Yours may be 2 words but a little more space between them please.
  
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• April 14, 2011 4:30 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #48 - Good, Thanks. Its still a little plain but at least there is some design not just the text and an image. #51 - No, still not quite. Take the logo from #36 and the brochure holder (Without the logo) from #43. Also try with and without the globe in the o of world.
  
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• April 14, 2011 12:18 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #20 - Disappointed that I have seen no changes since then. Can you look at the comments and make another draft based on them or are you out?
  
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• April 14, 2011 12:17 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #43 - Try the logo above the text like #36 and keep the brochure holder.
  
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• April 14, 2011 12:14 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #44 sorry - The icons I do not want changed are the 1st and the 3rd (left to right). Change the 2nd and 4th.
  
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• April 14, 2011 12:13 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #44 - I'd actually like to get more variety in the icons. Like with a floor stand and a tradeshow style display: See these links. http://www.brochureworld.ca/catalog/index.php?main_page=product_info&cPath=1_11&products_id=24 http://www.brochureworld.ca/catalog/index.php?main_page=product_info&cPath=1_11&products_id=103
  
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• April 14, 2011 12:06 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #44 - try making the oceans clear and the outline of the world only in blue.
  
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• April 13, 2011 4:08 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #39 -looks beautiful but nothing shows brochure holders in the logo.
  
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• April 13, 2011 11:14 AM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  Also note that prize is now $200.
  
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• April 13, 2011 11:13 AM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #30 - Its fine but its really close to #20 which I like better. Try to use the holder in another space within the design and add some other elements. I'd prefer a font that is closer to arial rather than times new roman.
  
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• April 13, 2011 11:11 AM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  Try some variation in where the brochure holder is in the overall design. Not just looking for versions of #20. #31 - try line drawings (with thicker line) for the icons and then try just a blue outline and red land in the globe. Also make the globe centered on North America. Or try to reverse the shading and also make stronger lines on the 'clear' parts. Just too hard to make out right now. #20 Try some design elements, like a stylized underline or something around the design or ? #36 - Like the design aspect of it. Maybe merge somehow with the holder in #20 (remove the centre divider in the holder). Also try squaring off the b in the design so that it looks like a b and sort of like a brochure holder. So like a b but square (still radius the corners).
  
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• April 13, 2011 9:15 AM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  Project extended 3 days. More feedback on latest designs in a few hours.
  
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• April 12, 2011 11:03 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #29 - sorry the colours aren't working for me. #28 - Nothing looks like that on my site, try a style I actually carry.
  
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• April 12, 2011 3:35 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  I have pushed the decision to extend to just before the 'close' time. If I were to make the decision now it would be to extend so please don't hold back. However please also don't just put up some last minute portfolio building design.
  
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• April 12, 2011 12:35 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  All designs that did not follow the brief are going to be eliminated. It is not a comment on the quality but just that the brief was not followed for colour or style or exact wording (ie 2 words).
  
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• April 11, 2011 4:34 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  Will decide tomorrow noon Pacific time if the project is to be extended.
  
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• April 11, 2011 4:33 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #26 Still not sold on the brochure holder sitting on the design element. Also please revise holder to something like what you might find on the site itself.
  
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• April 11, 2011 3:34 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #24 - Colours have been specified. Brochure holder is nothing like anything on the website. The brochure holder should not cover up your design element of the swoosh on top in my opinion.
  
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• April 11, 2011 1:40 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #22 - I like the idea of a cooler design but I'd rather have a regular holder and then a cooler design around it. Like the change to a transparent look though.
  
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• April 11, 2011 1:19 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #20 - That is a nice workable design. I'd like to see more design elements but if I had to pick right now, this would win. #19 - not sure about the solid brochure. Also do not like the fold over look. I'd rather just have it look like a sheet of paper.
  
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• April 11, 2011 12:58 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #19 - Try and make the lines darker like #18. Also you did not make the literature wider in #18, you just changed the text. So they both still need some work.
  
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• April 11, 2011 12:20 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #16/#17 Also need it 2 words Brochure World.
  
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• April 11, 2011 12:20 PM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  #16 Try darker lines to make the design stand out. Not too dark but darker. #17 - The literature is too small - if you would like to have that it should be just slightly smaller than the holder. But overall that is more what I am looking for but lets try and get a bit more design elements with these images to make it a bit more dynamic.
  
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• April 11, 2011 11:12 AM
   gfacer
    Project Holder
  See brief for uploaded sketches.
  
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