Bus. LOGO + Bus. Card Design.... Joseph Tokarz, D.C.

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• June 16, 2011 1:55 PM
   ACEdesign
   
  @ Project Holder, Please check private message (top right link: 'Messages'). Thank you.
  
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• June 15, 2011 2:57 PM
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    Project Holder
  fawwaz, #107: Great design. Technically, spine is upside down! This is getting tough!
  
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• June 15, 2011 2:54 PM
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    Project Holder
  acedesign: #106: Very nice! Could you clean the central portion up by shaping this as an s curve? At present, it appears like a comb.
  
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• June 15, 2011 2:48 PM
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    Project Holder
  Acedesign, #105: Great design. I like the dimensional aspect created by the central spine. Could you try chopping off peak on top? Also reduce/modernize the 'tabs' coming off the spine! Great overall design!
  
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• June 15, 2011 2:45 PM
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    Project Holder
  logoon: Thank you for submitting card designs. Overall concept is GREAT! But would love to see the design within the logo cleaned up. PLEASE show me an example of shortened horizontal lines while tapering these lines to the bottom. PLEASE!
  
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• June 15, 2011 2:40 PM
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    Project Holder
  #109: Nice! Really like the overall concept. I like the new green area, however the blue area appears like the laces of a football. Could you clean this up by shortening the horizontal 'tabs' while tapering the white area as seen in other submissions?
  
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• June 13, 2011 1:52 PM
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  #86, deemrano: Nice. Could you modernize the horizontal spine? Presently looks like film. Try a Round shape surrounding the burst vs. square. Brighter colors as well? Many thanks!!
  
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• June 13, 2011 1:49 PM
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  #82, fawwaz: Nice! Could you modernize spine located within icon? Perhaps to match green border of the card? Many thanks!
  
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• June 11, 2011 8:45 PM
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    Project Holder
  Trying to finalize this! #47; logoon: Please make horizontal lines shorter and transition to bottom. Try a brighter blue. Magenta or red 'glowing' spot within white burst. Card design/layout? Overall a fantastic design! Many thanks! #73; fawwaz: Very professional! Spines within icon seem a bit prehistoric. Perhaps a thinner line running alongside wider 'spine'? Great color. Many thanks! #67, paijo: Great elements here. Please modernize central white curve. Wide middle and tapered on ends? Thanks a lot for all your submissions! #35; flovey: Great design! Could you add some 'pop' to this? Many thanks for your submissions... please note previous requests.
  
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• June 09, 2011 1:24 PM
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    Project Holder
  #35: flovey.... any enhancements to this? Contest closes soon! Thanks!
  
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• June 09, 2011 1:22 PM
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    Project Holder
  #70: Very Nice!! Could you de-emphasize the 'tabs' on the spine, eliminate them or 'modernize' them? Thanks!!
  
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• June 08, 2011 6:16 PM
   2strongthumbs
    Project Holder
  #47: Business Card design?
  
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• June 08, 2011 6:14 PM
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    Project Holder
  #67: Can you de-emphasize the 'spines' and taper the white curve on each end? Many thanks!
  
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• June 08, 2011 10:43 AM
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    Project Holder
  #47 logoon: I like this design! Can we try a few enhancements? - de-emphasize and balance the 'spines' or tabs on the s-shape. -add a glowing element within the burst located within the green element of the icon. Suggested colors: red, yellow or magenta? Many thanks!
  
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• June 08, 2011 10:34 AM
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    Project Holder
  #45 Paijo: I like this design. Could you try adding a blue matching tapered lip to the icon. Also, please add a glowing red dot within the icon's burst. Also, could you make it look 'glassy'? Many thanks!!
  
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• June 05, 2011 10:00 AM
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    Project Holder
  hawkjade; #'s 22-25: Ideas along lines of #35 - 47? Or another idea? Thanks!
  
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• June 05, 2011 7:37 AM
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    Project Holder
  We're heading in the right direction! I really like #47, #46, #45 & #44. All are visually appealing. Thanks! Designers would be welcome to present other color options of their choice. #46: Try making swirl more horizontal with 'burst' above.
  
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• June 04, 2011 7:59 AM
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    Project Holder
  #38: Something good here. I like font and separation with color. Try lower case, no italic. Stylize swirl and de-emphasize burst. Eliminate black background.
  
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• June 04, 2011 7:47 AM
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    Project Holder
  Sorry for past delays. Down to business. #39: I like the 'icon'. Could we try a different font and lower case like #35. Different icon colors...blue and green? #12: I like simplistic, clean format. Eliminate 'burst', add an stylish icon. #35: I like the use of lower case font here and format. Don't like black background on other examples. Could we try a 'funkier' font? A different type of burst/swirl?
  
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• May 06, 2011 3:55 PM
   SiteAdmin
   
  Project has been extended for 3 days
  
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