Business Logo for Hagun Jaya Indonesia

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• May 25, 2011 11:26 PM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #93 the logo is not very obvious . how about if you use another logo for your designs ?
  
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• May 25, 2011 3:02 AM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #85 this looks good also .. keep more designs coming :)
  
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• May 25, 2011 12:11 AM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #78 can you do this using different color combinations ?
  
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• May 24, 2011 5:01 AM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  arriedann #68 i think you can try another design.. you have been using this idea for many variations already.. any new designs from you ?
  
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• May 23, 2011 6:36 PM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #49 is really good. can you space the writing a little more. Maybe you can experiment with the placement of the wordings also try a few other colors combination. the idea to incorporate the zipper is really good.
  
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• May 23, 2011 9:09 AM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #39 #16 can you try to space the writings more further apart.. too close to each other
  
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• May 23, 2011 5:10 AM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #42 not bad .. i kinda like it also.. good job
  
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• May 23, 2011 5:08 AM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #23 i love it a lot.. can someone do better than #23 ??? i challenge YOU :)
  
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• May 23, 2011 4:13 AM
   Eminence
   
  #32 As per my idea let it be symbolical and palin (Sofisticated) It has the Chain structure. What you say ? Adding Zip structure will make it look cheap as per me. I will make one and show you
  
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• May 23, 2011 4:11 AM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #31 i actually like your design a lot. the color and overall feeling is good. except for the HJI logo ... maybe you can make a new logo to go with the letters ?
  
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• May 23, 2011 4:00 AM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #32 maybe for the "H" you can do like 2 parts of the zipper chain (left tape and right tape) and the dot you can change it to be a slider.
  
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• May 23, 2011 3:58 AM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #32 is quite good ... keep it up :)
  
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• May 23, 2011 3:28 AM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  draft #31 can you pls change the "tick" to something else .. the effect of HJI is not very obvious. thanks
  
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• May 23, 2011 2:40 AM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  hello all wonderful designers.. pls keep those creative juices flowing... we have some great designs here but non had given the "jackpot" feeling yet.
  
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• May 22, 2011 11:30 PM
   abufahd
   
  @PH: I submitted two revision versions. Hope you like them more :) Terima kasih.
  
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• May 22, 2011 10:35 PM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #18 looks very nice ,however maybe you can adjust the distance between the H and J .. it looks like a Y now.
  
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• May 22, 2011 10:17 PM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #16 and #6 i like your designs .. maybe you can upload more varieties of your ideas for me to choose from?
  
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• May 22, 2011 10:10 PM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #17 the golden zipper looks good. however, i think in this instance, it makes the letter H looks uneven on 1 side. Do you have other ideas ?
  
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• May 22, 2011 9:35 PM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #11 i like how you try to integrate a zipper into my logo. maybe you can try other designs for zipper ?
  
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• May 22, 2011 9:33 PM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  #15 nice thought but i dont think the logo is suitable for my business. maybe you can relate that using another logo ?
  
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• May 22, 2011 3:40 PM
   Eminence
   
  #15 Something .....Creative bonding which will be in memory ... its a bonding which can be loosen or hold with human mind, thats a creative thought
  
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• May 22, 2011 8:57 AM
   hartagunawan
    Project Holder
  For Draft #1, thank you for your fast response to my request. i like how you arrange the wordings but the logo is not what i expected. initial thought is that it looks more like a "j". I think you are trying to make the initials "HJI" am i correct ?
  
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