FUSE

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• December 12, 2011 12:48 AM
   Markus
   
  ok . Thank you Sir!
  
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• December 11, 2011 5:05 AM
   fuselogo
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  #29 is almost perfect. After doing some tests we realised that the filling inside the mouth as you did in #15 adds some perspective. Please submit 3 proposals with a brigth, a medium and a dark red fading to black (a blend effect from black to red). Black starting on the top of the mouth and red on the bottom. Don't touch anything else. After that it's gonna be perfect.
  
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• December 10, 2011 3:23 PM
   Markus
   
  Hi In #28 I modify the jaw, tongue and text are the same
  
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• December 10, 2011 3:15 PM
   fuselogo
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  @Markus Do the following: -#27 Use the "Fuse" text -#24 Keep this tongue -#15 the upper part of the jaw is wider than your latest designs, we like it more Basically, redesign the #24 with the #27 text and the #15 wider jaw but keep the jaw design as in the #24 Keep up the good work!
  
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• December 10, 2011 12:49 PM
   fuselogo
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  #22: Upper part is perfect, DON'T TOUCH IT. Add a bit more volume and shadow effects to the lower part, principally the jaw, the same way as the upper part. Make it less flat and more relief. Also rework the tongue a bit to add more energy, right now it looks like it lies and it's too much passive. Please write Fuse below the snake using the same kind of font of the F on the forehead.
  
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• December 10, 2011 12:42 PM
   fuselogo
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  #23 #20 #19: NO COBRA
  
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• December 08, 2011 4:10 PM
   fuselogo
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  To #11: We appreciate your design but it's not exactly what we're looking for in term of style/impression. To #12 #13: We debated again during 2 hours this afternoon about your two recent proposals and we are a bit disappointed. I did some modifications visible here: http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/8193/snake8.png (bottom middle) This time it's done with gimp. To summarize: -Plain color to snake but not to tongue -Redesigned the shadows/darker zone Included a subtle F on the forehead of the snake. -Enlarged (125%) the upper teeth -Enlarged the jaw thickness, i doubled the size literally, and it does add some good effect -Reduced the jaw height. A bigger and thinner jaw makes the snake look gay. We don't want a gay snake but a viril one. -Added some bumps on the top of the head like little horns. -Removed the upper lip shadow "moustache effect" because we liked your holes/bumps effect. We also tried with one green eye and one yellow eye but we don't like it. What we expect from you: -Inspire yourself from our modifications (as in DO THEM) -Add your experience as a graphist to upgrade the quality We are close from our goal but there is this "little thing" missing. So far you did good and made great progress, that's why we were a bit disappointed by your two latest designs. We're expecting some top-tier touch, so when we'll see it we'll think "THAT'S IT" without even thinking of it. Keep up the good work.
  
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• December 08, 2011 1:59 PM
   fuselogo
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  #6 test
  
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• December 07, 2011 3:04 PM
   fuselogo
    Project Holder
  To #10 Please check out the modifications we did (bad quality, made on paint, and we're not graphists) and please use them as a reference. http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/5488/snakelogo4.png At first we removed your shadow effect, removed the jaw and colored the poison drop in yellow. Then we added some shadows in manga/tribal style. Then we re-added the jaw but picked some smaller lower-fangs Then we removed some parts of the jaw (like the Dodge Viper logo), removed the drop and we tried different sizes of fangs. We believe that the right direction is some bigger upper fangs, smaller lower fangs, no poison drop, shadows effects like we did them. Moreover if you could try a slight fade-in from black (2 examples: with and without one so we can compare). We focus on a black background. Thanks for your reactivity.
  
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• December 06, 2011 1:52 PM
   fuselogo
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  #3 #4 #5 are eliminated, we focus on a snake head, and we don't want a cobra. #7 Please do the following: -Bigger tongue -Larger fangs -Is there something wrong with proportions? Larger jaw and mouth, it looks too small compared to the snake head. -The eyes must be bigger -The little bump on the middle of the snake head is weird, remove it. -Shadows are ugly, do manga-style shadows. -nostrils should be redesigned -Please don't make it oblique, can you try different versions with more or less geometry? -Also, can you do a white and a black version in split images ? We don't know if we want something symetrical yet. Good point: it's really agressive #8 #9 Please take into account comments above. -More agressive -Yellow eyes -Bigger head -More details Thanks guys, keep up the good work.
  
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• December 05, 2011 3:15 PM
   fuselogo
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  Hi Brian, Thank's for your proposal. My feed back, I believe to sophisticated, to cartoons oriented, to many details. Look more like a dragon or lizard... Right direction should be only snake head, no cobra. May be with bigger eyes, in yellow? Have a look on Venum or Dodge Viper logo. My wishes: FUSE logo should be in between your proposal and both Venum or Dodge Viper logo. Kind regards Jean-Luc
  
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• November 28, 2011 2:35 PM
   fuselogo
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  refer draft #1 and #2 Hi monart, Thank's for your approach. However not corresponding to my expectation. The snake is not enough agressive. Not enough danger behind it. The sharpened fangs are missing, also the cold glare. The snake should be ready to bite. Imagine one moment: the outcome of the bite should be an ignition, explosion. I miss also "poison-forbidden-ritual and especially Underground". Regards Jean-Luc
  
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