French Bakery Brand Logo

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• September 27, 2014 2:48 PM
   mdsgrafix
   
  ATT : PROJECT HOLDER YOUR CONTEST IS VEILED MEANING .. WE ONLY SEE OUR OWN DESIGNS SO MENTIONING DESIGN NUMBERS IS NO REFERENCE FOR US REGARDS
  
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• September 27, 2014 2:33 PM
   dancelav
   
  How about the next changes you`ll input ,just for fun?!
  
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• September 27, 2014 2:04 PM
   rsauma
    Project Holder
  Dear All, Thank you so far for all your submissions. Please note that I have made some changes to the uploads, as I am modifying the direction of this project a bit. Some of the changes are as follows: - I no longer want a loaf of bread or the Eiffel Tower in the design. These two elements are making the logo's look too busy and crowded. We are aiming for a cleaner design. This is very important! - I have added additional postage stamps that almost match exactly the format and style of a "stamp" that I am looking for. To recap, this is a double circle, faded to represent "vintage" look as well as a hand printed feeling, "squiggly" line subtle and only to the right of the circle, and a slight angle so that it has a hand printed look and feeling. - I would like to see the "Bonjour" and "Paris" stick out more. This is most likely achieved by bolder fonts. Please see the uploads regarding "Bonjour" font and "Paris" font, as I have specific ideas of what this should look like. To recap, "Bonjour" font should be bold and the biggest, also can be creative. In the picture of "bonjour" font, I like how the letters are not all lined up, but rather are displaced. For "Paris", I know I would like a cursive style that is more bold and captures a more vintage style of writing. - The upload that has words fitting into a circle that are cut off but still legible is a very unique, modern and risky style that wound up working. Please take the time to explore this style of design. I like how even though the words are cut off it is still clear what they spell. I am open to accepting this style. - Lastly, I uploaded the "Tour de France" logo because I want to point out the unconventional and modern design characteristics. I like designs that take chances like this and are unique, but don't forget that we are equally concerned with capturing a "vintage" feel for the brand logo. I will comment on your logos individually now and provide feedback. Many are great logos and with the right changes could be winners. For your immediate reference, designs #95-#99 have done a good job following the parameters of my updated directions. The stamp style, "squiggly" line to the right of the double circle, faded look, and angle are all great. #87 has done a good job experimenting with a different style and taking a chance on being unique, which has granted a modern feeling. This logo needs color. #92 and #69 have also captured the idea of what I am trying to accomplish. I look forward to receiving many more of your excellent designs with the most recent adjustments. Thanks, Ryan
  
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• September 23, 2014 8:30 AM
   rsauma
    Project Holder
  The "de" should be smaller than "Paris". "Paris" should be pronounced but still not as big or pronounced as bonjour.
  
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• September 23, 2014 8:19 AM
   rsauma
    Project Holder
  Additionally, I think the logo is becoming too crowded with the eiffel tower. For this reason I advise that from now on we do not incorporate the eiffel tower. I will take the uploaded photos of the eiffel tower down right now. Thanks, Ryan
  
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• September 23, 2014 8:18 AM
   rsauma
    Project Holder
  Thanks to everyone so far for all the submitted designs, I will be providing feedback as we move through this project. I just wanted to note that I would like to make a slight adjustment to the original project parameters. Please check the "uploads" and refer to the new examples of the postage stamp that I updated. Instead of a stamp that is bought in a store, I would like to see a postcard stamp that would be applied to a postcard by a post office agency. Also, I need the whole brand logo to be on a slight angle, as if it was applied by hand and not straight and uniform as if it was applied by a machine. I thank you in advance and look forward to providing feedback to your projects. Best Regards, Ryan
  
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• September 22, 2014 2:23 PM
   giddycardenas
   
  Good day PH, Kindly check your messages link located at the top right corner of your screen. Thank you!
  
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