Business Logo, Intelligent Artifacts

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• July 13, 2011 8:18 PM
   sevakprime
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  Draft #128 and #129, can you make that into a thought-bubble? As is, it looks like smoke coming out of a chimney. Otherwise, cool design. Thanks!
  
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• July 11, 2011 1:10 PM
   sevakprime
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  All: Okay, the metallic/chrome stuff seems to not be coming out so great. Rather than getting something shiny and beautiful, the images look gray and muted. Chrome should look slick, shiny, and wet. It should look like liquid mercury. Google images for chrome or liquid mercury. Can anyone here do a cool chrome job? If so, I'd like to see it. If not, then let's move onto other attempts. Draft #86: Beautiful! Now, please focus on the bubble looking more like a thought bubble in its shape. Also, work on making the font a bit more interesting. Please also make the images larger so that I can inspect them better. Thanks! Draft #88: Exellent! Remove the check-mark and add a couple of small bubbles leading up to the thought bubble. Thanks! Draft #87: Cool attempt! Please work on the thought-bubble. It should not look like a word-bubble. This is very important. Thanks! Draft #85: Thanks for trying something different. The gears are too cliche, though. Draft #92 through #95: This isn't working. It doesn't look like metal or chrome. If you can't use textures, try something else. Thanks!
  
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• July 08, 2011 11:11 AM
   sevakprime
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  Draft #59: Great direction! Can you add better metallic (or chrome) textures? I'm looking for something very shiny. Thanks!
  
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• July 08, 2011 10:38 AM
   sevakprime
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  Draft #56: I guess this is supposed to be metallic/chrome? It looks very gray to me. Can you use metal and chrome textures to create the colors? Thanks.
  
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• July 08, 2011 9:24 AM
   sevakprime
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  Draft #44: Thank you for attempting #7!! Some changes: Can you make the cube seen from the same perspective as #7? Make the box black-ish and the thought bubble chrome? Give me a version with both the box and bubble chrome. Also, remove the "Ai" from the thought bubble. Thanks!!
  
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• July 07, 2011 1:36 PM
   sevakprime
    Project Holder
  Draft #39, #40, #41 is using a word-bubble instead of a thought-bubble. Draft #36, #37, #38 are ok. I'm not blown away by them, though. Draft #35, the parts of the bubble seem disjointed in line thicknesses. The top needs to not look like a box. Draft #33 and #34, wrong direction with a box.
  
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• July 07, 2011 11:01 AM
   sevakprime
    Project Holder
  Color choices: Please consider complimentary colors to our product logo. The two logos may be used together on web pages, etc.: http://www.mycroburst.com/drafts/display/contest/119815/draft/948185
  
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• July 07, 2011 9:47 AM
   designer83
   
  Hi PH, please read private message. thanks
  
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• July 07, 2011 9:45 AM
   sevakprime
    Project Holder
  Draft #32 is nice but needs polish. It's in the right direction! Thanks.
  
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• July 07, 2011 9:35 AM
   sevakprime
    Project Holder
  Draft #27: Okay, now I get the "!", but intelligence isn't about ideas. Maybe some useful adverbs would be "thinking", "problem-solving", "deciding"/"decision-making". All: Please, cubes are better than open boxes. The point of the cube is to represent that this is man-made. The box is too much of a "package". Wrong representation. Thanks!
  
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• July 07, 2011 8:37 AM
   kinghridoy
   
  #27 Hello again Sir, the exclamation point acts like an idea! Intelligence comes out of the box. Thanks, $H
  
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• July 07, 2011 8:30 AM
   sevakprime
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  Draft #18: It looks like a house. (Door and window.) Can you change that around a bit? Thanks!
  
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• July 07, 2011 8:24 AM
   sevakprime
    Project Holder
  All: Please keep in mind that the message to communicate graphically is of "intelligence" from an "artifact". An "artifact" is something man-made. Thanks!
  
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• July 07, 2011 8:20 AM
   sevakprime
    Project Holder
  Draft #26: I'm looking for something graphic, please. Draft #27: I'm not so sure about the exclamation point. But, I like the box. All: Something to consider is that the initials for Intelligent Artifacts and Artificial Intelligence are mirror copies of each other.
  
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• July 06, 2011 2:47 PM
   sevakprime
    Project Holder
  Draft #15: That's cool! Get rid of everything under the top-most box. Maybe add some subtle color, add your text from draft #12 either underneath or to the side. Nice!!
  
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• July 06, 2011 2:30 PM
   sevakprime
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  Draft #11: Very cool incorporation of the initials in the logo! Keep working on this variation. Maybe make the thought-bubble white so that it doesn't look like it's going to rain? And polish up the rest a bit, too. Great attempt, thanks!! Draft #9 #13 and #14: Way too dark. This is for a business logo and should look nice on a black-and-white business card. I like draft #9's structure. Please try it with the same colors and texture as Draft #12? I don't want to make customers think that the Terminator is coming after them! ;-) Draft #12: Better. I love the font work on this! Maybe, instead of the spiral thing, can you incorporate a symbol for "thinking" or "thought" inside?
  
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• July 06, 2011 1:24 PM
   sevakprime
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  Draft #8: Thank you! This is ok, but needs work. The colors are nice. The thought bubble needs to look less like a rain cloud. Think of a thought-bubble from comic books. Also, can you make it bigger? It is a little hard to see the details.
  
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• July 06, 2011 12:52 PM
   sevakprime
    Project Holder
  I would like to see variations of draft #7 (uploaded by me).
  
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• July 06, 2011 11:43 AM
   sevakprime
    Project Holder
  The logo should also look good printed in black-and-white on a business card.
  
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• July 06, 2011 11:42 AM
   sevakprime
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  All: Can you try a cube facing it from one vertical edge with perspectives fading down from top and up from bottom. Coming out of the cube should be a thought bubble. Draft #1: Interesting attempt. I'm not in love with it, though. Draft #2: I like it. Just a bit too busy on the inside with the extra chart lines. Can you remove those? I love what you did with "Intelligent Artifacts" That part is perfect! Draft #4: Way too busy and complicated for my taste. Draft #5: Interesting design. Not too sure about it. The picture doesn't communicate the message of an intelligent computer, though. Draft #6: I like the design, but it doesn't communicate the message of an intelligent computer. I like the font, too.
  
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