EquestrianDB Part 2

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• September 17, 2010 3:55 AM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #52 Thanks for your hard work and patience! Please would enlarge the horse image on the right. It is out of proportion with the other two. Also would you allow the gray to show through behind the lettering. The head of the horse in the middle is still too small and the neck needs to be extended a little. Thanks.
  
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• September 16, 2010 5:13 PM
   fotedefrappe
   
  It's subtle. Into #52 I have added : - + the horse neck - + balance between the white borders - different gradient
  
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• September 16, 2010 5:09 PM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #51, #52 Is there a difference?
  
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• September 16, 2010 4:33 PM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #50 Getting there. Middle horse still needs to have a longer neck and larger head and preferably the head pointing down more. Can we try with having the same opacity of the gray from top to bottom. White margin to lettering looks good. Thanks.
  
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• September 16, 2010 3:00 PM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #49 Please could we have a gradual transparent gradient of the horses behind the lettering and have a white shadow around the lettering so that there is a narrow margin around the letters. Thanks.
  
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• September 16, 2010 2:35 PM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #24 We still like this design, however the proportions of the head and neck are not right. Please see comment for #47 below. Thanks.
  
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• September 16, 2010 2:34 PM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #47 Middle horse: The proportions are not right. Please make the neck longer and the head larger and make the head face down more. Thanks.
  
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• September 16, 2010 9:55 AM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #45 having the logo appear over the eye just doesn't work.
  
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• September 16, 2010 8:30 AM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #44 We like this except for the placement of the horse's head - it doesn't look quite right. Please could you try and position it behind EquestrianDB (not the logo) and somehow blend it into the wording. The design and wording must 'come together' somehow. I hope you know what I mean. Thanks.
  
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• September 15, 2010 2:26 PM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #42 Almost. Put the jumping horse to the far right. Make all horses smaller so that they all fit behind the EquestrianDB and not the logo. Thanks.
  
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• September 15, 2010 7:25 AM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  qcssoft #39,#40 We like these expect for the design of the horses head. Please could you make this more like a horse's head. I'm told from horsey people that the shape is nothing what a real horse's head actually looks like. Thanks.
  
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• September 15, 2010 2:34 AM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #31 Please could we see the following changes made to this design: Replace rider on right with rider on left. Remove rider on left. Move all 3 riders left so first rider starts behind the E. Have the lettering layer on top of the silhouette layer. Have a white stroke around the letters so that the edge of the silhouette does not come in direct contact with the letters. Thank you.
  
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• September 15, 2010 1:17 AM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #25 Please could we see a version with 100% of the silhouette behind the text and give it a white edge where it comes up against the text as in #20 and bring down the vertical height of the rider on the right a little. Thanks.
  
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• September 14, 2010 3:57 PM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #25 Could we see them about 50% smaller with the girl on the pony coming inline (not below) the other riders. Thanks.
  
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• September 14, 2010 2:52 PM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #5 I like this one alot except for the head which is not attractive.
  
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• September 14, 2010 2:49 PM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  Please note that the EquestrianDB logo has been slightly updated and can be found at: http://www.equestriandb.com/Content/css/equestriandb/Images/dblogo_440x82.png
  
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• September 14, 2010 2:43 PM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #23 Well done! This is much better. Any chance we can have more like this? Perhaps showing 3 or 4 different riding styles (racing, dressage, jumping, etc.) appearing as a silhouette in the background from left to right)?
  
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• September 14, 2010 8:31 AM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  Hi #5 is the closest so far to what we are looking for - hope that helps.
  
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• September 14, 2010 3:58 AM
   fotedefrappe
   
  Several logos seem to be compliant with the brief. However the max rate is 2 stars. Can you tell us more exactly what you are looking for please ?
  
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• September 13, 2010 3:12 PM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #12, #13 I think you've missed the point. Please read the brief again.
  
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• September 09, 2010 12:48 AM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  Suggestion: Imagine the type of design Google would use on their logo.
  
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• September 08, 2010 6:32 AM
   sunnyonline
    Project Holder
  #1 Good attempt. Too large. Not very original. Direction of movement should be forward, ie. left to right.
  
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