Logo for a village bakery

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• December 20, 2013 8:33 AM
   VillageBakeShop
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  #20 - This design always make us laugh. It is fun, which we were looking for in a design. Very clever. Our biggest concern is that from a distance it looks a bit like a bunch of grapes - might be a great design for a wine label. Do you have any ideas to adjust it a bit - maybe turn the bike and riders slightly for a better profile of the tandom bike? We really like the text. Can you incorporate "The Village" in addition to the Gourmet Bakery text and/or replace with The Village Bakery. Thanks for your design!
  
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• December 20, 2013 8:25 AM
   VillageBakeShop
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  #25 - This one looks very good too. Could you also remove the box from the back of the bike on this design also? Thanks.
  
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• December 20, 2013 8:25 AM
   VillageBakeShop
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  #30 - We like your design in the center. Could you remove the box on the back of the bike and and make the bread loaves in the front basket longer (like a french bread) so they stick out a bit more? other than that, it looks very good. Thanks for your efforts!
  
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• December 20, 2013 8:19 AM
   VillageBakeShop
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  #28 & 29 - Getting closer. We prefer the ones that do not have the larger sized E on the end of Village. The Village font and the Bakery font still don't quite seem to go with each other. If you can give us a few more options on the fonts, we'd appreciate it. We don't want to overemphasized the words The Village. The bakery is actually more important for us to convey. So either through size or font style - they need to blend together a little better. Thanks for your efforts!
  
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• December 19, 2013 8:39 PM
   VillageBakeShop
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  # 21- can we see this design in black and white and without the loaf of bread that is under the bike?
  
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• December 19, 2013 8:38 PM
   VillageBakeShop
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  #18 k 19- can we see those same designs without the red?
  
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• December 19, 2013 8:37 PM
   VillageBakeShop
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  #14- we really like your design. Could you change the font on "The Village" to something a little softer or rounder?
  
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• December 16, 2013 12:18 PM
   VillageBakeShop
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  Draft #7- I like the apron - nice touch! Too much red...can you remove all red except for apron and scarf?
  
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• December 16, 2013 7:08 AM
   VillageBakeShop
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  Draft #2- You are on the right track! We really like the bike and the characters you designed. A couple of suggestions: we don't care for the bread outline. We sell primarily pies, cakes and cookies, although we do sell bread. Could you perhaps add a basket on the bike and put the bread in there? To add the pop of red it could be a red and white checked napkin in the basket or a scarf tied around the neck of the girl or in a cherry pie held by the man. I'd like to see a baker's hat on the man. I think the dish he is holding gets lost in the middle- perhaps you could turn him around a bit and have him hold the steaming pie behind him. Thanks for your designs!
  
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• December 16, 2013 6:57 AM
   VillageBakeShop
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  #6- thanks for your entry. I like the bricks on the wall. The bike is cute, but needs to be built for two not one and more goodies in the basket. There also needs to be more of a bakery theme...perhaps the bike can be shown parked in front of the bakery window? So far it just doesn't convey much of our theme or make you think of a bakery.
  
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• December 15, 2013 4:40 PM
   VillageBakeShop
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  Designers- the file we uploaded for inspiration is a photo of a sculpture and not our current logo or a logo we wanted updated. We are asking for something new, original and modern (not quite so old fashioned). The photo was to provide an idea to show how a tandom bike might be incorporated. Please do not use that photo or depiction in your final design. Thanks!
  
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