The Covered Lint Roller

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• January 05, 2012 12:31 PM
   sheilama
    Project Holder
  I like the font of "covered" in draft #4. Could you change draft #29 & #30 to this font? Thanks.
  
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• January 04, 2012 6:17 PM
   sheilama
    Project Holder
  Okay, I think this will be the last request for changes. #20, #22 & #4 are the top runners at the moment. I like the simplicity of #4, could you change the font to that in #20, then may I see a version with "covered" in purple & "lint roller" in black and then another with "covered" in black and "lint roller" in purple. Some friends provided feedback that #20 is too busy & the extra flowers are detracting from the words. Could we change the "o" in "covered' back to a letter and could we either make the extra flowers smaller or take one away? #22 is really pretty, can we either make the cluster of flowers on the left smaller or maybe take out one flower & change the arrangement slightly. Also can you make the paw prints on the right a little bigger? Thanks so much for your patience.
  
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• January 04, 2012 8:48 AM
   sheilama
    Project Holder
  I am agonizing over #19, #18, #17. They are all great! The only change that I would like to consider is on #17 - Please keep everything the way it is except can you change the color of the word "covered" to the purple color and change the words "lint roller" to black? Thanks so much.
  
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• January 03, 2012 8:31 PM
   sheilama
    Project Holder
  I like #16. Can I see a little variation? Would you make "the" a little bigger, would you make "lint" the same color and font as "roller". The emphasis should also be on "covered", could you make it slightly larger than the other words. Finally, would you flip the paw prints. They look like they are upside down which makes it a little harder to see what they are. Thank you!
  
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• January 03, 2012 7:23 PM
   Witonics
   
  Sheilama: Thank you so much for the constructive feedback! I apologize for the delay in uploading my second draft for you to view. I have added more flowers as you requested and changed the fonts. Are these new fonts more to your liking? Or would you like me to try a more sophisticated font with my new design? -Witonics (draft #4)
  
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• January 03, 2012 6:41 PM
   sheilama
    Project Holder
  Right now my top choices are #14, #11 & #4. One of the most important features of the logo is that the paw prints are visible. #4 has the most visible prints. I also like the unique style of #4. The only thing I don't love about it is the font. I am looking for something a little more sophisticated which is why I like #14 & #11. Since the original designer who submitted #4 has not responded, would anyone like to try and interpret that design with my suggested changes using your special talents?
  
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• January 03, 2012 12:39 PM
   sheilama
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  So far, my favorites are draft#9 & draft#4. In draft #9 I like how you put the paw print in the "o". I still like the flower in draft#4 better. In draft#9 can you make the flowers look more like the one in draft#4 and maybe put a paw print in the center of the flowers? Could you also capitalize the "t" and the "c"? Draft#4 still needs a little work with the font and more flowers. Draft#10 & #6 are a little too busy, flowers are too ornate. I also like draft#7 but not the font for "the covered". I like how you incorporated the paw prints in the flower petals. Thanks again for all the help. I think we are very close to what I am looking for.
  
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• January 02, 2012 6:11 PM
   sheilama
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  I really like both draft #2 & draft #4. In draft #4 the flower is perfect. I also like how you curved the roller. I like the font of draft #2 a lot. The flower is also very creative with how you show the paw prints. I would like to add a few more flowers to both designs, varying the shapes and colors. With draft #2 can you think of another way to incorporate the paw prints? Thanks so much for all of your efforts.
  
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