Tri-Fold Brochure for Funky Dance Studio

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• December 12, 2012 11:30 PM
   steveyi
    Project Holder
  Thank you all for your designs. This is going to be a very tough decision. Such brilliance and creativity! Will choose a winner shortly. Thanks again!
  
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• December 11, 2012 11:58 AM
   steveyi
    Project Holder
  Draft #17 Outside Left, Center, Right: Would it be possible to make the whole side more fluid and continuous like the inside and not broken into panels? Outside Right: Can you use the image you used in Outside Center for the front cover to give it an instant impact? If you do this, please use another image for Outside Center. Thanks! Steve
  
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• December 11, 2012 11:52 AM
   steveyi
    Project Holder
  Draft #21 Great submission. Way to rally! Outside Right: We need an image that gives more impact for the front cover. Something like what you used for Inside Left. Perhaps use that and another image for Inside Left. Thanks! Steve
  
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• December 11, 2012 11:44 AM
   steveyi
    Project Holder
  Draft #26 This looks great. I think the facebook logo looks good. Just a few more edits with the choice of images used. All of them looks too similar. Outside Left: Could you use this couple or similar image here? 110846254 Inside Left: Can you use another image like this beautiful solo dancer in red dress here? 152998429 Thanks!
  
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• December 10, 2012 6:26 PM
   steveyi
    Project Holder
  Draft #13 Outside Center: I think you missed the red color change in the word "phone:". Can you also concatenate the word "e mail" to "email" (remove space). Thank you! Regards, Steve
  
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• December 10, 2012 6:25 PM
   akreationz
   
  Does the facebook logo need to be on the back? I took it out because something about it didn't look right with the rest of the content.
  
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• December 10, 2012 5:53 PM
   steveyi
    Project Holder
  Draft #12, Thank you for the quick edits! Just a few more if you don't mind. Inside Left: Can you make the font in the dance styles bigger? Not sure why I like things bigger but I just want the dance styles to stand out and hits you in the face. Inside Center: The numbering list starts with "Visit our website..." and step 4 should be separated into two steps. With these correction, we should have a total of 5 steps still. Outside Left: Can you add a Welcome title and move the Register Online to Inside Right or somewhere between Inside Center and Inside Right? Outside Center: Not sure how I feel on the look and feel of the "find us on facebook" and the web address. For some reason, it seems out of place. Any way to make it a bit more integrated? Thanks! Steve
  
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• December 10, 2012 11:42 AM
   steveyi
    Project Holder
  Draft #4 For all the section titles, can you use a more modern, blockier font that very easy to read? Also, can you add the website address in the outside center?
  
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• December 10, 2012 11:41 AM
   steveyi
    Project Holder
  All, I have failed to mention in the word document to include the website address in the outside center. Please add it right after the Address. I have uploaded another version of the document with this detail. Sorry about that. Also, please use an appropriate facebook image for Find Us On Facebook. Thanks!
  
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• December 10, 2012 11:28 AM
   steveyi
    Project Holder
  All I can say is WOW, WOW, WOW! Such great creativity and ideas! Thank you all for your submissions. Draft #11 Inside Left: Can you highlight or give more weight to the whole section of the Dance Styles We Offer. The weight of the font looks too light and we would like to emphasize our dance offerings. Inside Center: Is it possible to number list the top part after "Here's how to get started"? Also, can we bullet point the "Things to know" list? It doesn't have to be a bullet, it can be any image. Outside Center: Can you include our website address? In general, can you make the section titles much bigger (Dance Styles We Offer, Getting Started, Things to Know) Draft #8 Love it. For all the red color you used, it seems very burgundy and a bit darker than the red in our logo. Can you make it brighter to march our logo color? If possible can you add our website address in the outside center under For More Info section? Thanks! Steve
  
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• December 09, 2012 1:22 AM
   steveyi
    Project Holder
  Hi draft #2. Thank you for your design. I was away on travel so apologies for not providing feedback sooner. Great first draft. I have attached a word document with all the brochure wording. Please follow this document instead of the description in the brief. Please use a consistent font all around. As for the images. I love the front cover image you used that I provided. For the other images from thinkstockphotos, I would like to use couples in more normal clothing so it's more approachable to the general public. Here are some of the images I really like from thinkstockphotos and hopefully these can work fluidly in your design. 141094100 138296307 101072059 154224773 99820100 152998429 (Solo dancer that just looks cool) 110846254 86513311 152130517 149074230 100773682 94027727 Thank you so much!
  
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• December 06, 2012 11:53 AM
   SiteAdmin
   
  Attention Project Holder: Please be informed that your project is a veiled project and designers are restricted to view only their own drafts which ensure that each design has its own originality however, you being a project holder can see all the designs. Suggestion: Provide consistent feedback and star rating on designs to attract more designers towards your project. Thanks, MB/LDG/LS Team.
  
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• December 06, 2012 11:53 AM
   SiteAdmin
   
  Designers, Please only use images provided by the project holder. If in case source of images has not been provided, you are requested to use images from “www.thinkstockphotos.com”. Images used from any other website or source will not be accepted. In case you are using images from “www.thinkstockphotos.com”, please make sure to keep a record of image ID numbers as contest winners will be required to provide those ID's. Furthermore, designers are requested only to use system fonts on all web design projects, files with non-system fonts will not be accepted. Thanks! MB/LDG/LS Team
  
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