Dr Dent Stationery Design Project

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• June 19, 2012 3:52 AM
   drdent
    Project Holder
  thank you for the great designs. please remember the brief is for all stationery as per what a few have done.... i hope to see after these comments all designs coming through for the complete stationery.... including a DL envelope. Some general feedback regarding the designs and content of the cards is listed below.. Design - we like the use of the logo on the black card for the business card, with the inclusion of the green which brightens it up. logo for Stationery is obviously on white background with the use of the green and black to ensure it ties in. The logo looks good when it is not overpowered by clutter or too much content/design elements encrouching on the logo. The design and font used for the word with compliments on #116 is good. Business cards Clean designs are preferred. the swirl idea across bottom of card is still considered however not overly favoured at this stage however the way the panel with reverse text is on #91 works (although grey is too bland for that large panel) The Perfect Finish can also be shown away from the logo. The pattening effect on the black card of carbon fibre etcin design #9 is interesting... not required but does take our eye. information on front can be reduced to reduce clutter to name, title, contact number, website and The Perfect Finish.Other details like lic repairer number and address details etc can go on reverse of card. Reverse of card - rather than Dr Dent Services please refer to it as The Perfect Finish in: the the points. Change Insurance point on reverse to Insurance-Preferred Repairer instead of Head Office change to Correspondence: website needs to be highlighted a bit more rather than just listed as one of the details. specific information will be emailed to each designer aswell that relates only to their designs..... Happy designing - only 2 days to go show us what you have... more projects to follow.......
  
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