Online Self Defense Training Academy

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• January 17, 2013 12:16 PM
   SiteAdmin
   
  Attention designers, Upon finding some issues with the winning design, the client have decided to reverse their decision and the contest will be reopened for all the designers again shortly. You are requested to stay patient and keep on checking the project page for updates. Best of luck~ Support Team.
  
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• January 11, 2013 9:43 PM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #111. WOW Great. Color Improvement. It looks like a brown around OSDTA and brown for the text "Become the Victorious Not the Victim. I think we need a deeper and darker color, suggest Black.
  
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• January 11, 2013 4:04 PM
   SiteAdmin
   
  Designers, Raster based design will not be accepted as winner so you all are advised to submit only vector based designs. Good Luck!! -Steve
  
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• January 11, 2013 2:59 PM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #109 and #99. Looking great. Colors nice. We need to add in "Become Victorious & Not the Victim" somehow and somewhere on the design. This is the final stages
  
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• January 11, 2013 11:15 AM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #106. No Transitions in Online Self Defense Training Academy underneath OSTDA, make text solid red and outline in white
  
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• January 11, 2013 11:12 AM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #106. Outline Fighters in White. The color transition within the ODSTA. Focus the attention of the view to the "TA" and not the attire image. Can we soften the white or make the color transition between the reds, blue instead of white
  
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• January 11, 2013 8:05 AM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #99. Very Nice Job. The blue is nice, but I think is driving a sense of calmness. However their must be a sense of urgency to learn my system so color is extremely important. Color Improvement 1 - add yellow around text and keep everything else the same Color Improvement 2 - make fighters in yellow with white outline, make text red with white outline (use bicolor and line curve form sample #99)
  
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• January 11, 2013 7:54 AM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #99, #100, #103, and #104 globe and fighters are great. Nice job on the fighters. Please make the color in number #100 in #104
  
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• January 11, 2013 7:43 AM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #101. Text letter very nice. However, the dragon is cool but not the direction I am seeking for a logo. Since my system is web based, I am look to capture clients on a global scale. Consumers need to feel the urgency but the logo to look more into my training system. They need to have a sense of no matter where they are in the world that they can have access and be victorious over their attacker
  
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• January 06, 2013 8:40 AM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #18. I like the text. But do not understand the logo concept to the left. It needs to have more definition and appealing to the global martial art user or people looking learn self defense combatives online.
  
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• January 06, 2013 12:44 AM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #14. Can we feature the tag line into the concept "Become Victorious and Not the Victim". Remove the white'ishness between the continents. The text and outer circle needs to be better
  
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• January 05, 2013 9:04 PM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #13. The graphic is cool in the middle. However the flag is representing the USA, Online Training System is Global brand.
  
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• January 05, 2013 4:22 PM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #7. Very Nice. I think that "BECOME VICTORIOUS" needs to be bigger than "and NOT the VICTIM". Prefer box over circle
  
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• January 05, 2013 3:41 PM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #6. For the center circle "globe" can we create that idea of the world and linking the concept of global access. See first picture of Online Self Defense http://www.americanmartialartacademy.com/programs/online-training-academy/
  
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• January 05, 2013 3:17 PM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #5. The idea of the globe is cool. I think that you are going for "Self Defense Global Access is in your hands" Nice concept. But needs to be translated better in the customer.
  
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• January 05, 2013 3:15 PM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #4. Interesting. The hands give an idea of a peace offering instead of self defense. Text should read first Online Self Defense than transition below the "stars' to read Training Academy. Image is clean but needs more excitement and interest
  
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• January 05, 2013 3:09 PM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #3. Thank you for the two different concepts. The flow of #3 is nice. However the red text "online Self Defense Training Academy" is hard to read within the red and blue colored lines. The tag line should focus on more on Victorious and Victim not on "Become" and "And Not". Not solid on the line curve below OSDTA.
  
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• January 05, 2013 9:13 AM
   SiteAdmin
   
  Attention Project Holder: Please be informed that your project is a veiled project and designers are restricted to view only their own drafts which ensure that each design has its own originality however, you being a project holder can see all the designs. Suggestion: Provide consistent feedback and star rating on designs to attract more designers towards your project. Thanks, MB/LDG/LS Team.
  
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• January 05, 2013 9:09 AM
   SiteAdmin
   
  Attention Designers!! MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you are providing 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if the particular draft gets finalized, each color version should be separated before you will send the final files. Thanks, MB/LDG/LS Team
  
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• January 05, 2013 7:46 AM
   OSDTA
    Project Holder
  #1. Thank you for the first concept. I am looking for more than a remake of American Martial Art Academy. Online Self Defense Training Academy needs to be a brand and image by itself. Within the logo design, we need to feature the tag line, Become Victorious and Not the Victim. Again thank you for the initial concept.
  
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