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• June 01, 2012 5:06 PM
   jwkahana
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  GeErre: #75 is interesting, feels modern, but it feels kind of dead. it needs something to bring it more alive.
  
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• May 30, 2012 4:43 PM
   jwkahana
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  Miroslav: #68 could probably use a more modern font and something to make it more interesting. artsie9324: #69 is alright, i liked the color for toaster better in #59 sharleen: #71 and #72 are great. the color and gradient in the text really makes it pop, the outlet in the O adds some fun personality. good work. :)
  
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• May 30, 2012 12:32 PM
   sharleen
   
  Detail in #71 (in case you don't notice): you can see through the wire.
  
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• May 29, 2012 10:48 PM
   jwkahana
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  lovepower: #50 looks good. not sure what else could be done to make it better. #54 is creative, but needs something to be more visually stimulating. #56 is a little creepy. :) #57 i like that you're experimenting with borders, perhaps one that's a bit more unusually shaped? marii: #51 is interesting, the legal name doesn't involve the word "the" though. some color would be nice. aqvart100: #52 is a lot easier to read and i like the font. not sure what else could be done to make it better, though it feels like it needs something. good work though. cioby: #55 looks a lot better, good work. hatter: #58 is quite literal, but unfortunately invisible needs to be easier to see. the font is fun, all together it feels a bit unbalanced though. artsie9324: #59 i like that you added some color, i think i'd prefer a different color for Invisible though. #63 is a nice play on the shapes. not sure i like the font. sharleen: i really like #61 and #62, i wonder if there isn't a way to bring some more color into it without making it too busy. Miroslav: #64 looks kind of Ren and Stimpy to me (definitely quirky), but it's all the same color and kind of boring and doesn't have a very professional feel to it. #65 is kind of the same deal with a different font that's less Ren and Stimpy. echoplex: #66 is interesting, but all the same color and not very visually stimulating.
  
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• May 28, 2012 3:22 PM
   jwkahana
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  lovepower: #34 #35 #36 - the bread definitely looks better in these, but it does look like the cord added some balance. perhaps #36 with the cord back would look best. melody1: #37 - not a big fan of the font or colors, things feel unbalanced. cioby: #38 #39 - i like the look and the font. i wonder if there might be a way to give the bread a modern CGI-style look. it looks kind of clip-arty to me right now. sumit128: #40 looks great. the new cord is good, i really like the look of #40 that doesn't have the orange lines around the bread seen in #41. good job. artsie9324: #42 is cool, it could use some color though. #49 has 'invisible' misspelled and i'm not very fond of the font. it doesn't feel very balanced to me either. sharleen: #43 #44 #45 are fun, i like #45 the best, but i wonder how this would work with lighter background. if i could see this with either a dark or background and see it work i'd rate it higher. #46 and #47 have a toaster that is too visible to me, although the font and appearance are nice and balanced. jynemaze: #48 looks like a travel company logo to me. i don't really get quirky and smart from this.
  
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• May 28, 2012 10:23 AM
   sumit128
   
  Hi Project holder please check your private message (upper right). Thanks
  
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• May 27, 2012 1:57 PM
   jwkahana
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  sumit128: #32 is a lot of fun. my only request would be to make the plug look more american. christopher64: #33 - it's difficult to understand what the black lines are underneath. i think they're shadows but the perspective seems wrong for shadows. also, with this font, it seems like it works alright if it's inside of something, but standing on its own it is a bit boring. maybe a different font and different colors for each word. some gradient on the text might also help.
  
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• May 27, 2012 1:53 PM
   jwkahana
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  melody1: #25 - i'm having a hard time determining what the circular objects are. i'd also prefer a more modern font. raindesign: #26 - the colors seem a bit odd together to me. the font is alright, not sure the image is quite what i'm looking for. #27 is a bit odd with the colors too. i think part of what makes something quirky work is that it's unique in its own way, but can stand alone and look solid. lovepower: #28 is very good. the slice further away looks a little funny dimensionally i think because it's a little bigger (or maybe as big as) the closer slice. i'd be interested in seeing a version of this with the socket but no visible cord as well. #29 has a fun play on the toaster with bread for the A, which might work better if the toaster wasn't supposed to be invisible. I like the concept but I wonder if there might be a way to make it work better. jynemaze: #30 has a nice font, i'm not very fond of the line and i can't really tell what the abstract mark is. cioby: #31 is very good. the colors work well. the font selection works well. the only thing really stopping me from rating it any higher is that the bread could use a little work. i wonder if it might be possible to bring a modern feel to the bread. i would definitely like to see a revised version of this.
  
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• May 26, 2012 10:56 PM
   jwkahana
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  christopher64: #21 is fun. it looks like the IT on the bread is maybe butter? it might look more like that if it was more misshapen. this particular one feels like it's missing something. perhaps the text would look better if it was caps but the first character was larger for each word. #22 feels a bit abrupt in how the toast is cut off, and the font doesn't really strike me as being that interesting. #23 is simple and hints at a feel of something i might see on a splash screen, though a "glow" effect might work better than the white around the text and some shadows below everything would probably add to it too. the font is okay, but i'm not in love with it. it's very simple ... something more modern would probably sit with me better.
  
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• May 26, 2012 10:46 PM
   jwkahana
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  klarsen: #16 #17 #18 #19 #20 - of what you've submitted i prefer the shadow in #18, the font in all of them looks seems a bit too "standard system fonts". #19 and #20 look like the text is the toaster, which doesn't really work since it's visible (not that i want the text invisible :) ). the bread could probably use a slight gradient. when i made my comment about #6 i didn't mean to say that eliminating a background shape behind the symbol was necessary, just the bevelled look wasn't working. an abstract mark with an interesting shape and the unseen toaster inside (or on it) could actually be cool.
  
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• May 26, 2012 4:30 PM
   jwkahana
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  klarsen: i'm having a hard time figuring out what's going on in #14. i think it's the shapes and how they overlap making it hard to place the scene. the font is alright, though i'd prefer something more modern.
  
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• May 26, 2012 4:28 PM
   jwkahana
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  talmor: #7 - i like the font, but it's hard to tell what the word "Toaster" says. lovepower: #8 & #9 are cute. the style reminds me a bit of a far side comic. i think i'd like it more if it looked less hand-drawn. aqvart100: #10 & #11 are great. in #10 the invisible is kind of hard to see and of the two the v looks a bit like a U, though i like the font otherwise. cioby: #12 & #13 are fun, though i feel like the bread could use some work. the font is alright, though i would prefer something more mordern ... the socket going towards the O is fun as well, though the socket type looks european to me (Invisible Toaster is US based). I almost think the cord would look better if it was more abstract and modern.
  
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• May 26, 2012 11:27 AM
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• May 25, 2012 11:46 PM
   jwkahana
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  klarsen: #6 - i like the bread, the beveled frame around it doesn't really do it for me as much. it might be intresting to see like a kitchen counter with hovering toast and shadows from the toast beneath it. maybe a wall socket where this toaster is probably plugged in. not sure how this would actually look, but the idea is interesting. the font is alright as well, i think the beveled frame bit kind of throws the rest of it off, so it's hard to tell how i feel about the font.
  
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• May 25, 2012 7:45 PM
   jwkahana
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  sharleen: #1 - i like that you put the floating bread in there. i'm curious about what it would look like with a shadow. the font doesn't really stand out to me very much. i would have rated higher but it feels like something is missing with the abstract mark ... something feels out of balance. schary: #2 #3 #4 #5 - the feel of these designs don't seem to match what i desribed in the brief.
  
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